Energy Project Evaluation

Final Energy Project thoughts:

My findings were a good representation of someone living in a small community (like a college) but what about more average people. What about people who travel in larger circles? Or what about people who spend more money on their cars? This project needs replicated to fit the lifestyles of more people. I think if more people tried this experiment (possibly with larger radius), we'd get a better understanding of the average person and their expense on commuting. I think the average person would have to bike a larger radius.... but hey.... isn't that a good thing anyway. Thanks for taking time to read, the following are self-evaluations of my presentation and my video.

Presentation: 88 out of 100
Good things:
-Content interesting and well organized
-Conclusions offered viewers options
-Data was defined and gathered well
Needs improvement:
-Too many variables
-When vehicle is needed to transport more
people or objects than only the driver
-What effect will ice have on both driving
and biking?

Video: 88 out of 100
Good things:
-Delivery and tone was comfortable
-Hand motions added
-transitional phrases helped
Needs improvement
- read off of Power Point too often
-speed was fast
-intonation was not varied